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Loriel
02-01-2013, 01:09 PM
... Though the Teladi are notoriously bad pilots, every trader has had his share of accidents on the carousels. ...

"Though" seems wrong here - surely the Teladi are having crashes because they are bad pilots, not despite it. Therefore suggest
Though -> As (or Because, or Since)

Alternatively if the Teladi are actually good pilots (though I don't think this is supported by what I recall reading), could have
bad -> good

Appears to be in 7211-L044.xml, after <t id="1031018">

Loriel